here's a panel from the marker project we had to work on. it's my favorite, but ironically it's the one I put the least amount of time on. Kind of disappointed with the other ones. I mean russia was pretty cool. I might as well put that one on too.
random sketch based off someone's character sketch :)
annd here's what I handed in for my photoshop project,
i'd like to fix a few things during the break, like some sort of action between the city and travelers. a crashed spaceship, and the foreigners look yonder to discover some sign of highly intelligent beings. But for now I think I'll leave it alone for a bit; been staring at rocks for too long. Also, there's a few surfaces that aren't exactly clear nor does the perspective make a shred of sense, but I tried :P
health update: pretty much healed, except for Monday morning where I almost puked on a woman next to me, but at this rate that seems pretty normal. Gotta watch what I'm gunna eat this holiday, yo.
I think that you went a bit muddy in terms of plane separation in the foreground. Think of things overlapping each other, like layers of acetate. Look at this http://scribblepadstudios.com/gallery/displayimage.php?album=7&pos=26 and compare yours with a pro level piece.
ReplyDeleteOther than that, it was a promising composition. The area around the city is a bit too symmetrical though (two almost identical slopes... you could paint some shape in the background to break that).
looks pretty good, you ended up flipping the final image?
ReplyDeleteYeah, I liked it better that way :P
ReplyDeleteI took note of it Xin, and I'll try to fix it, thanks for pointing out